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:iconmrsamcro13:
it's good but i think you can put more definition in the character but its still good i would recommend timing drawing for about an hour a day and time yourself i have used this many times and i have got better over the years or go online and watch how to draw videos i have also done that and I have drawn characters like Ichigo from Bleach, Ed from FullMetal Alchemist, And other drawings but i'm just saying that you need to practice and practice and you will get much better in no time at all you have potential
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BluSilvrPaladin Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I appreciate the critique, and whereas it is constructive in helping me learn how to draw better, I would have appreciated a critique based on the character concept, not my style or technique.

Thank you just the same, your words are warranted, just not as a critique on this piece.
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:iconmrsamcro13:
your welcome and sorry i haven't critiqued anything in a while but it was a god drawing
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BluSilvrPaladin Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you again. I hope you keep an eye out for some of my other pieces. All in part for the book series I'm writing with =ToAtoneArt
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i will
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